Score: 5

"Funny"

submission: Spamnation

date: April 18, 2008

I thought it was quite hilarious, I have been in a similar situation myself but dynamite was not necessary, my only criticisms are that it was quite choppy at times if you dealt with this it would be better, also graphically it was quite poor but it was your first animation so I have no doubt you will improve.

In future challenge yourself and take time on detail yes sticks are easy to draw and animate, but I feel If this was a fully animated fbf flash there would be no doubt this would have made front page.

Score: 2

"Ugh, Voices."

submission: Dieting

date: April 15, 2008

I liked the concept, however It just didn't fly very well, the voices were slightly annoying and the animation consisted of a badly drawn fat guy moving his head every now and then some blue splats on his face, then it stopped. You didn't even give him proper bitch tits, which dismayed me.

Nice try though.

Score: 8

"It Was Very Good"

submission: The traveler

date: April 15, 2008

Especially for somebody who deals mainly with sprites, I enjoyed the atmospheric effects you used especially the fog and the reflective surface of the water. I also liked the fact that you used a sprite in it as if it were homage to you past work. I wasn't quite sure about the Soul Calibur music but loved it when Chopin came on.

My only criticism is that although it did have a story line it seemed quite loose, one way of takling this would be to make a prequel or indeed a sequal then the current submission would be more comprehensible, also the blood was badly animated which was a bit of a letdown especially after you did so well with your other effects.

Nice job though, I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Score: 6

"Quite Good"

submission: Ambiance BR

date: April 16, 2008

I like the pan pipe type music at the start and then how it it seems to get slightly heavier, I also liked how it changed nearer the end but felt it could have been done earlier then wound down to the finale.

Nice job

Score: 7

"I Really Liked It"

submission: The Esplanade

date: April 15, 2008

I liked the drum loop in the background and how it suddenly stops and starts again just at the right moments, there was something almost oriental about it which I loved, the only criticism I would make is to make what sound like a mobile phone to me quieter, although a vital part of the track I feel it was slightly annoying.

Score: 5

"A Nice Little Track"

submission: WiP - Piano - No title

date: April 15, 2008

Nothing to fancy, but It was quite enjoyable, my only criticism is that it was quite short and just I was starting to get into it and want more of the track it looped over back to the start of the song.

Nice Though