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Very Annoying

I really did not like it.

Pro's

you obviously know some of the basics of flash.

Con's

Needs a good old clean up plenty of white borders around objects, also you had what looked like stick figures and a basic tween, the music was also terrible.

Try again.

dooseyboy responds:

thank you for your helpful critisism i really appreciate it.
ok.
yes i do only know the basic of flash this is true but im working on it and im working on about 2 other quite basic projects (im gonna make an alpha on it.
so yeah also the song isnt mine

Lots of room for improvement

Good points - It was a decent length and despite the randomness it seemed to have some sort of plot.

Bad points - Graphically it was poor, if you spent a bit longer on the character design it may have got a better score also the voice overs were so annoying it was unbelievable.

jonohomo responds:

randomness is my middle name. how very dare u say my voice is annoying

I really liked it

Good Points - It was really funny, well animated and the graphics were well detailed, I also think the bad lip syncing made it funnier.

Bad points - The metal music at the start seemed out of place and I think you should have added a bit of gore when the guy had his head kicked off.

I voted 5, and think it deserves a higher score, I really hope you get underdog of the week.

SickPuppyExplode responds:

Couldnt have gore, its a childrens show ;P

Kind of funny

enjoyed the animation style, and the randomness of leslie gore, however it seems it had been cut short a bit because it ended abruptly and left me wanting more.

Darcsider responds:

Yeh, the competition I was entering it into had a 30 seconds to 1 minute time limit and I had to cut a bunch off.

thats a cock?

it looks like a big hairy turd, i liked your flash skills though, and respect for having the 'balls' to submit it, i dont know why its acquired such a low score apart from the subject matter it is fine.

JohnnyTremain responds:

Ya. It's a cock. Thanks for the honest review, and the seven. I like your style.

really nice

Your animation could be improved, maybe make the guys legs and arms move, but i think the message conveyed in it is quite ubiquitous and i loved the music.

LordArmstrong responds:

I was thinking of making him move but I like the simplicity of the song and I wanted the animation to reflect that.
Thanks for the review.

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