Score: 5

"Funny"

submission: Spamnation

date: April 18, 2008

I thought it was quite hilarious, I have been in a similar situation myself but dynamite was not necessary, my only criticisms are that it was quite choppy at times if you dealt with this it would be better, also graphically it was quite poor but it was your first animation so I have no doubt you will improve.

In future challenge yourself and take time on detail yes sticks are easy to draw and animate, but I feel If this was a fully animated fbf flash there would be no doubt this would have made front page.

Score: 2

"Ugh, Voices."

submission: Dieting

date: April 15, 2008

I liked the concept, however It just didn't fly very well, the voices were slightly annoying and the animation consisted of a badly drawn fat guy moving his head every now and then some blue splats on his face, then it stopped. You didn't even give him proper bitch tits, which dismayed me.

Nice try though.

Score: 8

"It Was Very Good"

submission: The traveler

date: April 15, 2008

Especially for somebody who deals mainly with sprites, I enjoyed the atmospheric effects you used especially the fog and the reflective surface of the water. I also liked the fact that you used a sprite in it as if it were homage to you past work. I wasn't quite sure about the Soul Calibur music but loved it when Chopin came on.

My only criticism is that although it did have a story line it seemed quite loose, one way of takling this would be to make a prequel or indeed a sequal then the current submission would be more comprehensible, also the blood was badly animated which was a bit of a letdown especially after you did so well with your other effects.

Nice job though, I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future.

Score: 9

"I Liked It"

submission: Zombie Slayer Redux

date: April 14, 2008

It was quite enjoyable to play despite being a little short.

Pros

The selecton of weaponry was just right and I died a few times through lack of health, which is good because that means its not to easy, though if I had a second play-through I would be confident I could do it without dying. Graphically it was fantastic, I liked the physics of the zombies falling as well.

Con's

The zombies seemed to be the same throughout, apart from that grenadier zombie if you went through the levels increasing difficulty and making the enemies more varied it would have been better. I also noticed a little glitch when you die using the chainsaw it continues the noise for a while after you die.

Improvements

More varied enemies, perhaps add a flying enemy or two, why not make the soldier enemies shoot, you could also add a whole RPG element to it i.e. increasing skills with weapons, running faster jumping higher, I would replace this with the rampage meter which I barely used.

Score: 6

"I Enjoyed It Initially"

submission: IGSSD Updated!

date: April 13, 2008

However it was quite easy and I got bored quite quickly.

Pros

I liked the way when you shot the meteor's they seemed to turn to dust, I also generally like these kinds of games, it was almost base defense like. The gun shots looked ok and your framerate worked well.

Cons

I disliked the music and every now and then it would come back on forcing me to press M again, It also got quite samey after a while I mean the only improvement with 'enemy' was they got faster, money was also very easy to gather taking a bit of the edge of the game, I would improve the meteor graphics too.

Improvements

improve on the graphics and perhaps introduce new enemies and have an upgrade where you can speed the ship up or stop time etc.

Nice job though

Score: 6

"Enjoyable Yet Tricky"

submission: Bubblegume

date: April 13, 2008

I quite liked it and it was very good for a first flash.

Pro's

It was suprisingly addictive, i liked the whole blast radius thing too.

Con's

the bubbles moved a bit fast, and I was also expecting to hear a popping sound when the bubbles popped.

You could improve it by making the bubbles look more translucent, and adding more levels perhaps adding different types of bubbles.

Score: 1

"Very Annoying"

submission: i like your pants

date: April 13, 2008

I really did not like it.

Pro's

you obviously know some of the basics of flash.

Con's

Needs a good old clean up plenty of white borders around objects, also you had what looked like stick figures and a basic tween, the music was also terrible.

Try again.

Score: 2

"How many ways can you dress up a Banana?"

submission: Dress Up Banana V2

date: April 13, 2008

It does make me wonder, why make a version 2 why have you not tried to move on to bigger and better things?

Pros

As a dress up game it worked quite well, there was enough room to move things around in.

Cons

Graphically quite poor, the music was also quite annoying but my mute button came in handy, the selection of items was also lacking which made it quite short.

I wouldn't make a V3 I mean really what more can you do with it apart from make more items, in my opinion you should try and improve you skills elsewhere.

Score: 7

"Very Good"

submission: invasion 3d

date: December 14, 2007

However I really hope you improve on it if you make a second one

Good points - It was 3d which i liked alot, the concept is awesome and the were nice, I also liked the simple sound, for some reason it reminded me of a very basic copy of body harvest

Bad points - The controls took a bit of getting used to, maybe if you put a max speed on your craft it would help a story would also be nice, the options at the start were not very clear as well.

you could improve it by introducing new weapons that have the potential of killing multiple enemies but also multiple civilians as well.

Score: 8

"Fun"

submission: Snowdrift

date: December 13, 2007

Good points - It was enjoyable and the voice acting gave it a kind of arcade feel, simple to get a hang of and easy to play.

Bad points - Music was annoyingly repetitive and I couldn't see an option to turn it off, though I did have an ad in the way as my flash did fuck up a bit, so my apologies if it was, It also got a little boring quite quickly, perhaps you could have added bigger snowflakes that melted slower than others.

Nice game overall though, gratz.